“Aapka Dhyaan Kidhar hain, Chai
Idhar hain – Aaliya”
“FUCK … U just scared me – HR”
“What, why??? –Aaliya”
“Nothing, I was enjoying the view
and u say things out of the blue – HR”
“In fact I forgot that there was
someone else in the room – HR”
(Lord, forgive me for lying early
morning, but you know I was looking at Aaliya and thinking about her)
“Huh, u forgot I was in the room.
How rude is that – Aaliya”
“No, I mean check the view from
here, it’s so wonderful. Even you would be lost”
<Lost, I was already lost
thinking about u>
“Huh, see now u know. My choices
are good – Aaliya”
“Better listen to me if you want
to have a good experience for the rest of the time”
(Do you mean, rest of the life ... Coz that’s what I want)
<I mean the rest of the life,
but u being dumb the way you are, I am sure you would not understand>
<Wait, why am I talking about
the rest of the life with this Hopeless >
<AM I FALLING FOR HIM,
aaarrrghhhhhhh>
“Ok baba, waise I don’t have chai
but let me make it for you, you seem to have a habit of it – HR”
“U gonna make tea for me?? –
Aaliya”
“Yeah, why not. What’s wrong in
that?? – HR”
“Nothing, I like mine strong with
less sugar – Aaliya”
(Ha ha , I like strong pegs and
she likes strong tea … Is that a coincidence,
Acchi jamegi hum dono ki :P)
“Can I use the bathroom in the meantime,
unless u need to use it – Aaliya”
“Go ahead – HR”
(Let me clean the bed a bit so
that we can sit easily)
(I hope she noticed the pillows
and realizes that I don’t just want to get in her pants)
(I want her to be there when we
name our grandchildren)
(Oh !!, her sheets. They smell of
her)
(Should I hide and take them
along with me, as a memory)
(I think this is the closest I
can get to her)
(The sheets smell like it has
been used to cover the roses in the spice market)
(It’s as if the roses are covered
with the dust of the spices)
(And due to it, it has the
fragrance of the roses but a slight hint of the spices)
(So this is what she has been
wearing all the while, the Moroccan oil I smelled in the start. Now I know what
it is)
(Should I ask her what this
perfume or oil is so that I can purchase one and keep to remind me of her)
(That might sound creepy!!!!)
(I can tell her that I love the
fragrance so much that I would gift it to my future girlfriend)
(Would she believe this??)
(Is she singing a song inside the
bathroom?)
(Why is her voice muffled?)
(Is she choking??)
“Aaliya, Aaliya ... Are you OK?? – HR”
“Hmmphhh – Aaliya”
“What happened, are u choking?? “
“HMMPHHHHHHHH – Aaliya”
“I am ok; I was singing a song
while brushing. What happened – Aaliya”
“I was worried that something happened
to you – HR”
“Aww, is the tea ready - Aaliya”
“Listen – HR”
“Tell me – Aaliya”
“Please don’t do this ever again;
you got my heart to the mouth – HR”
* For the ease of understanding
of who is saying what, here is the guide *
(Thoughts of HR, kept to himself)
<Thought of Aaliya, kept to her>
“Dialogue by one of the character, the name of the person saying the
words are mention towards the end – HR/Aaliya”
awww!! sme deja vu 'feel gud' moments here ^_^
ReplyDeleten lol to ur guide at d end :p
What are 'feel good' moments ???
DeleteThe guide was needed coz this time both HR and Aaliya were thinking ..
As if u didnt need it .....
again a big smile on my face while reading the whole blog monuuuuuu :) :*
ReplyDeletehuh HR thinks so much :( now both of them think like crazy:( its the time they need to share not think grrr jo bhi hai confusion toh door hoga ;)
liked where u wrote hope she notices the pillows also that was sweet :) and the way her smell ohhhh the way u have described it make me wanna smell her :P haha and how he drinks tea just for her ....so many awwwww moments here ..very well written ..having all the emotions being cited here I love it :*
love it as always:) keep writing :*
:) a big smile to read ur comment too :) :) :)
DeleteHR has always been the thinking kind, its Aaliya who is acting weird by thinking ;)
i hope u were not serious when u mentioned that u wanted to smell Aaliya up, coz that would have been so gay :P
Whats with the aww moment u guys are talking about, such things are common in the life of our dear HR .
Thanks once again for ur comments :)
U dunno wat r feel gud moments??? haww..wat kinda romantik r u? :d
ReplyDeleteGuess wat! I actually did not need ur guide okay!! haanji! abhi aapke blogs padke itna tho smart ban gayi hoon ki i can understand (without a guide) wat r HR's thoughts n wch ones r Aaliya's ;)
I agree wid Aparna..its time they share their thoughts n talk to each other rather than themselves. I cannot imagine keeping shut wid so much wandering inside my head :/
Who said i am a Romantik, m just a medium for the HR to express his feelings ...
DeleteGood to hear that u don't need a guide to understand the blog ;)
What do u think ll happen when the ever lack of expressive HR and cracking Aaliya open up ??
Along with your posts, the comments by your readers are also very interesting. Even i would say the same thing that Dolly and Aparna wrote, now both the characters should open up and say things to each other, not just thinking. I know the story is a past, so things would not change to what readers wants. I am eagerly waiting now to see when they would talk rather thinking about each other.
ReplyDeleteha ha ha ... so u saying the comments are better than the blog, huh.
DeleteYeah, lets see what happens in the future of what has happened in the past ..