Did U just drunk propose me??
Well I did propose u but I am not drunk, maybe I am but I
know for sure that it's not the booze. It you who is making me act or sound drunk.
And it's not happened now, it has been going on since the time I have met you.
My senses have stopped working, I am lost most of the time and all I want to do
is be with you. If I may say
I have become like what happens to a person after
he has his first drink.
I am high since the time I have met you and I have been
trying so hard to speak my heart out but finally it's the booze which made my
words come out.
Also please don't ignore my words assuming that I am drunk coz I don't see
myself speaking my heart out while I am in my senses .
How do I know that it's the real you and not a person who is drunk and wants
some amusement or drunk sex.
Well I am sure nothing I say can convince you but I am sure of one thing, I
will not be able to express my love while I am sane.
Hmm ok, this is complicated.
But but ....
What, we will forget that u even proposed me and continue
the way we are now . Ok ??
:(
Say yes or no ...
Ok
Also keep in mind one thing, if you try to act any cheesier or try to get close
to me. I will leave you the same moment and abandon this trip.
Deal ???
C'mon, this is putting too many conditions
Yeah and this is how it is going to be, agree or I leave.
Ok, but..
Now let's the the hell out of here, I need to feel the sand and water at my feet.
Btw do u know how to swim??
Ha ha ha gimme a life jacket and I ll drown with that as well..
Wtf ur such a loser, though I don't know how to swim but I sure can avoid drowning..
Bhaiya bill dena .
Let's go.
Shit, if only I knew swimming I could impress her by doing all the butterflies
and dolphins :( FML
Are u going to come in the water or just stand and stare??
Yeah yeah, is it cold??
No, it's not. Come in now!!!
And at that moment it occurred to me why I love her so much.
She is so different than me
She is like the ocean, uncontrolled...
She loves to LIVE
She is like the perfume, which how much u stop will spread
her fragrance
She loves to bring JOY
She is like the MOTHER
FULL of LOVE
And that is where I differ…
Will we make a good couple???
Will I be able to keep her happy?
Will she be able to live with my STILLNESS?
I loved those lines "My life has become like earphone chords...... How carefully you keep.. the moment u take it out.. its fucked! " :D :P
ReplyDeleteAmazing blog! seriously!
Keep writing!
muaaaah! :)
Yay, thanks . And I thought u stopped reading the blog ;)
DeleteNice, you are better than Chetan Bhagat
ReplyDeleteDear Anonymous,
DeleteI am not sure if that's a compliment or criticism but since the name Chetan Bhagat is involved here, I will take it as a criticism.
Thanks for stopping by.
The brief hiatus has definitely forked out those tiny nuggets of love hidden in that heart kinda brain..and what a creation is Aaliya..she steals the glory from the protagonist with such enchanting ease..
ReplyDeletevery well carved out.:)
:) Thanks for the kind words ... Hope to read more of ur thought about this stupid love story ,,,
DeleteAah I hate wen I am not able to comment as m the first one to read it ..anyways here u go ...
ReplyDeleteAmazing blog as rightly said by ritu :) ..lovely..HR proposed and this time all this is actually happening I hope u don't make it a dream in the next part :p but it's a pleasure to read ..the super conscious Aliya as always likes him has so many thoughts about him but not ready to accept ..god knows when she will or u know .. Make them happen soon na ..
I love how u everytime put these eye catching lines n it's such an amusement to actually think over it ..this time it's about those earplugs :p
Drunk propose ring some bells here :)
Loved it :) lov u mwaaaah :*
Keep writing and this time don make us wait for so long :*
Ha ha, late in commenting. HR already proposed in the last blog this is just an acceptance blog by the smart Aaliya ;)
DeleteAll these small stupid similie and metaphors i use are what makes writing the blog so tough and now i am sure you are getting bored with the stupid comparisons :P
Whether this is a dream or reality, only time will tell .. Personally i would want it to be a dream but lets see how it goes.
As always thanks for your kind and appreciating words.
Finally somethin is up here after ages! Der aaye durusth aaye :) Good piece of writing yet again, but the time gap btwn d last blog n this resulted in the loss of the feeling of continuity. Maybe you could hve mentioned a bit frm the previous blog in d words of HR or smething in the beginning of this one as a memory refresh..jst a suggestion :)
ReplyDeleteAnd drunk proposal! I knw a guy who had sch a proposal..n it was NOT HR
:)
Aye Aye Cap'tn .. will maintain the continuity ..
DeleteBTW will not consider this as ur review, waiting for that ..
She is like Ocean.. Uncontrolled
ReplyDeleteN She loves to LIVE
Don't forget that tsunami comes in oceans not in quiet ponds....
Ok .. and who would u be to know all that .... I thought this was my blog ...
DeleteOcean will remain ocean,
DeleteIrrespective of your blog's course.
So u say .
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