(All through the journey to our
room I was confused of how come Aaliya didn’t react when I talked about
marriage)
(Finally on reaching the room,
she went directly to the window and drew the curtains)
(The sun was about to set and the
sky had cast a pinkish blue hue over the Bay of Bengal)
“Wow, this looks so amazing. I
love this place – Aaliya”
“I know – HR”
(All this while the luggage
bearer was standing in the room and waiting for our permission to leave the
room <read ‘TIP’>)
(It was only when Aaliya
mentioned this to me through her eyes that I realized it, coz I was so shit
confused of the new changed behavior of Aaliya)
(Her peacock eyes got me back to
my senses and I paid the bearer and told him to leave)
(Once the bearer left I wanted to
go and hold Aaliya from the back and njoi the sunset but was not sure if it was
the right thing to do)
(Had she started treating us as a
couple already)
(My mind went haywire coz of all
these thoughts when ….)
(I saw the pillow flying towards
me, and by the time I realized this, it was already on my face and I on ground)
(And Aaliya was on top of me
trying to punch me in my stomach)
“What do u think, just coz I
speak good to u and we are sharing the room you can say anything – Aaliya”
“U jerk – Aaliya “
“Hmmmph Hmmphhh mmmm
lsdfksdfdlf - HR”
(These were the only sounds
coming out of me coz the pillow was still on my face and Aaliya was on my
stomach)
(I tried to take the pillow off
my face but Aaliya wouldn’t let me, she tried to hold me down using the pillow)
(Finally I got hold of her hands
and stopped her from punching me)
“Sorry sorry , listen to me
please – HR”
“No, u deserve this treatment –
Aaliya “
“Ok, u can punch me more if you
want but listen to me first – HR”
(By this time she was exhausted
and was losing her grip)
“Hmmm, tell me – Aaliya"
“Since the time I have met u, I
feel a different kind of connection – HR”
“U seem like someone I know so
well since ages – HR”
“Every moment with you is like
something destined for me - HR“
“I know I may sound crazy but all
the time these are the thought going on in my mind - HR”
“I have started imagining you as
my partner already – HR”
“I am not able to have control over
my thought and what is in my mind is what comes to my tongue – HR”
“And trust me, I mean no harm –
HR”
“It’s not coz that we are alone
on this trip and I am trying to Patao you but I feel we were destined to be
together, not just for this trip but for many more trips – HR”
“FUCK !!!!! - Aaliya”
Kudos Mr Writer :) every time the end just gets me longing for more .. FUCK!!! How do u manage to do it to ur readers every time ..?
ReplyDeleteEvery write up plays in front as if m watching a movie scene.. N yes d tip thingy it reminded me of something :p
Good to hear that a piece of fiction reminded you of something which happened in real life . Aparna ur too kind with your words of appreciation ..
DeleteThanks is all i can say ...
Please don't give the SHIT to the readers that this is work of fiction!
DeleteHa ha
DeleteOnce again waiting ....post your next blog soon ...wanna see how Aaliya reacts after d so not expressive HR to express all of it :)
ReplyDeletePlease don't mock the lackofexpression HR ...
DeleteNext blog .... Is on the way soon .
I agree to what Aparna said , "every write up is like a movie playing". Though i was reading your blog, but didnt have much time to comment, i could not stop from commenting this time.
ReplyDeleteLong time. I was thinking that the blog got boring and hence u stopped reading/commenting. Good to see you back ..
DeleteAbout it being like a movie, i hope you are not comparing the poor blog with stupid movie like "Himmatwala" et al.
He he he he he....not at all, first off all i don't like to spend my hard earned money on stupid movies.
ReplyDeleteI do read your blog, but don't get time to post comments, got some time last weekend and commented.
Keep commenting, it make the writer i.e. me feel good ;)
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